Fog so thick
Journey through the mist of aqua
as the droplets kiss your neck
The warmth and moisture of it's arms
will grasp you in it's dampen depths
You'll never know just how this wonder
Drew you in it's charming trance
Before your eyes, the fog will thicken
swirls of vapors start to dance
Suddently the mist condenses,
wrapping you in clouds so thick,
perhaps you should have thought before
you entered through the beauty mist
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I really liked this post and how you had a good vocabulary and managed to make it rhyme! Good Job!
ReplyDeleteYou have an amazing way of using a lot of detail to portray exactly what you are writing about. Your writing is very consistent and flows very well. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteVery evocative!
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